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雅思写作大作文的技巧

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英语写作对大家来说不算难事,但想要在雅思考试中写作拿高分却不是一件容易的事。大家在写作中耗费了许多时间,结果效果却并不是那么的好。很多同学在拿到作文题目时,没有思路,不会分析,不明白作者的出题意图,结果自然言之无物,内容空泛,毫无亮点和特色,自然不能吸引阅卷老师目光,取得高分。下面是小编为您收集整理的雅思写作大作文的技巧,供大家参考!

雅思写作大作文的技巧

一、并列结构的使用

通过对官方范文的研究发现,考生在用并列结构提高句型档次的时候可以从以下几个层面入手:

1. 名词并列: n1,n2,n3,…

这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现:

a). A,B,C,… and other Xs

b). X,such Y as A,B,C,…

i. Reading,writing,listening and other academic subjects could be learned from books,or primarily from books.

ii. Some knowledge,such academic subjects as reading,writing,listening,could be learned from books,or primarily from books.

iii. It is of great importance for people to read imaginative literature,such as poetry,novels or mythology.

iv. It is of great importance for people to read novels and other types of imaginative literature such as poetry and mythology.

2. 名词性成分并列: n. + what/how/whether/if…

这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现:

a). what=something that

b). how=the way/manner in which

i. Most parents educate their children merely by instinct rather than proper pedagogy,and usually do not care about their relationship with children and how much neglect influences the future development of their children.

ii. Most students are eager to obtain knowledge,but they lack the sense of what is good,or what is necessary and how much a deficiency in the concept of viewing the situation as a whole would mislead them.

iii. My fellow Americans,ask not what your country can do for you,ask what you can do for your country. My fellow citizen of the world,ask not what American will do for you,but what together we can do for the freedom of man. (John Kennedy)

3. 形容词成分并列:

a). a1 and a2+n

b). a1+yet/but+a2+n

c). a1,a2+n+that…

d). a1,a2,so a3 that/as to…

i. a small town à a small and peaceful town

a good teacher à a good and very impressive teacher

a stupid decision à a stupid and incorrigible decision

ii. a simple yet effective method

a direct and simple yet magically effective method

an irrational yet understandable decision

a fair and balance,yet undesirable decision

an obvious yet not the most significant reason

iii. Most students can hardly stand for his typically dry and dull lectures that would normally continue at least several quarters without giving any essential information.

iv. The impact that technology has had on our daily life and society in general,is undeniable. It will become even greater as computers get faster,smaller,smarter,and so inexpensive that virtually everyone will be able to own one.

v. A class led by a lethargic teacher could be extremely dull,and so boring that drives everybody in the class into sleep.

vi. Learning in essence is a process that is time-consuming,painstaking, and so hard that virtually only persistent few can finally have a sense of real achievement.

4. 副词成分并列:

a). ad1 and ad2+n

b). ad1+yet/but+ad2+n

c). ad1,ad2+prep…

d). ad1,ad2,so ad3 that/as to…

i. A conscientious teacher always prepares his lecture carefully, intelligently,and with the full consideration of all possible aspects concerning the subject.

ii. Apart from energizing the athletes, physical strength helps them plough into the games enthusiastically and with confidence and even act as a deterrent force to their rivals to some extent.

5. 动词并列:

a). …v1,v2+ing,v3+ing…

b). s1+v1+ing,s2+v2…

i. An absent-minded teacher lacks drive to make class intensely focused, often preparing nothing in advance,wandering among random topics, thus wasting and killing times of industrial students.

ii. As a result of this, food dealers have made huge profit from it, thereby promoting the sector as well as creating more jobs.

6. 句子并列:

a). …, and therefore/thus/consequently

b). not only/simply/merely…but also/…as well/even…

c). neither…nor

d). not that…but that…

e). that引导的宾语从句

f). that引导的定语从句

g). that引导的主语从句

i. Books keep records of thoughts and ideas, and are therefore the major source from which people obtain knowledge.

ii. Chinese children unfortunately have few rights to make their own decisions, and consequently often have to do things that they do not enjoy doing at all.

iii. Modern vehicles have extended the range of people’s activity, and thus made much more goods available to local markets.

iv. Computers have not only brought convenience, but they have also made people learn more.

v. Not that emails or telephones have made people less personal, but that people themselves have become less personal. One of several possible reasons is that people usually lack of adequate communicating skills.

vi. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.

二、从句的使用

从句的使用是提高写作得分最有效的一种手段,雅思写作中主要涉及的从句主要是名词性从句,状语从句和定语从句,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生既可以单独使用这些从句来组织句子,还可以采用从句套从句的方式来提高句型的复杂度。

7. 从句套从句:

i. Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is the recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. 宾语从句+定语从句+表语从句

ii. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. 定语从句+状语从句

iii. The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. 宾语从句+定语从句

iv. But overall, I think that this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career. 宾语从句+非限制性定语从句

v. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. 名词性从句+状语从句

三、倒装句的使用

倒装句的使用主要包括否定词位于句首时的倒装,比较句中第2个句子的倒装和虚拟语气条件句中的倒装。

i. Not only should the parent spent more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often.

ii. Only in this way can this issue be effectively solved.

iii. Nor a bad environment will make people healthier.

iv. Only in very few regions do the residents have enough water for their daily needs.

  雅思写作备考这5个陷阱 你被坑了吗

还在为不知道怎么备考雅思写作发愁吗?看看下面常见的5个陷阱,你是否“中招”了呢?

陷阱一:背大学四六级词汇就能顺利通过雅思写作考试

相当多数量的同学听说只要花时间把大学四六级的单词全部背熟就能参加雅思写作考试。其实,大学四六级英语考试和雅思考试完全是两种不同的英文测试系统,两者没有内在联系,应试方法也大相径庭。

从写作角度来说,雅思的学术类大作文没有所谓的词库,而学术类报告的常用词汇和国内英语考试写作的词汇又是完全不同的。

烤鸭中有很多已经顺利通过大学四六级考试,有的甚至是高分通过,但是他们的雅思写作分数却是很低,有些甚至连5分都没有到。显然仅靠背诵四六级词汇是无法顺利通过雅思写作考试的。

针对这一误区,建议考生多阅读国外学术类报告,积累词汇和惯用句型,或者看剑桥雅思系列真题集4-10,里面的阅读文章包括附录中考官给出的高分范文中的词汇都是雅思写作考试的重要词汇。

陷阱二:裸考雅思,以考代替复习

有些同学认为只要多参加雅思考试,分数自然会提高;而且原因是没有太多时间看书复习。

雅思考试并不是一门“廉价”的考试,有些去外省市考试的同学还要考虑交通和住宿费用。

对于绝大多数同学的家庭来说,这并不是一笔很小的开支。因此屡战屡败,屡败屡战不是很聪明的方法。而且考多了会对学生的心理产生一定的影响。

因此建议同学们必须经过系统性的复习后,有一定的准备和把握了再去参加考试,以期顺利通过。

陷阱三:反复做剑桥真题系列,就能得到写作高分

剑桥真题系列是一套非常经典和权威的雅思应考资料,有同学将其作为备考圣经,反复做里面的套题,以期节省培训费用和时间,在雅思考试中取得不错的分数。

确实有很多没有参加过任何培训,只是通过做剑桥真题就考出不错成绩的同学。但是这些同学共同的一个特征就是英语基本功扎实,逻辑思维出色,学习方法得当。但是对于普通同学来说,只刷真题,不总结,不反复推敲,显然是不行的。

正确的做法是要仔细阅读剑桥附录中考官所写的范文,推敲其段落布局,词汇句型,培养思路和语感。

陷阱四:大量背诵写作模板

很多学生过于相信一些写作论坛或者写作书上推荐的写作模板,并且将其运用到雅思考试中去,但是最后的分数却是差强人意。

其实模板作为一种解读雅思写作思路的工具还是起到一定作用的,考生可以通过阅读写作模板来迅速了解雅思写作段落布局和层次。但是钟情于模版的学生一般的写作分数甚至连6分都不到。所以不推荐同学大量背诵写作模板,理由很简单:写作是“活”的,模板是“死”的。

正确的方法是多写,写之前要对雅思的两部分写作结构有一定了解,词汇和句型要有一定积累,最好是找英文写作强于自己的人帮助批改。

陷阱五:光看范文而不写

只看不写肯定不能在雅思写作考试中考出应有成绩。因为雅思写作考试只有一小时时间,要完成两篇高质量学术文章。

同学们平时只是单纯阅读高分范文或者老师写的文章,而自己不去写作的话,首先无法对时间有个很好的掌控,即使是英语专业的学生,若在考试前不写的话也是不行的。其次,如果不写的话有些单词拼写错误或者句型语法错误就无法及时暴露,从而成为最终考试的绊脚石。

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