托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写

写作中最主要的三种句型：因果论证句、比较对比句和假设条件句。下面就来看一下比较对比句具体该怎么写!

托福写作解析:比较对比句怎么写

Movies: serious or entertaining?

Therefore, the merits(advantage) encompassed within serious movies far outweigh those of entertaining movies.

Adervertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.

In reality, compared with other sources of negative influences, advertising only plays a small role. the eating habits are formed on the basis of many complicated efore, it is rash to consider it a major cause of those unhealthy eating habits.

Compared with A, B...中的A和B是两个同类的事物

托福写作句型赏析：一句话三种逻辑

名句欣赏：

There has been an implicit assumption that because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people, but that does not take into account how the electricity they use is generated.

解析：

这句话比较长，但逻辑主干还是比较简单：

There has been an assumption that A, but that does not take into account B.

有一个假设A，但这并没有考虑到B

A 是 assumption 的具体内容， B 是考虑的内容，即 = take B into account

A=because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people

1) A 是 assumption 的同位语

2)electric cars 电动汽车

3)burn fossil fuels 燃烧化石燃料

4)safe 在这里的意思是[not likely to lead to any physical harm or danger ] 不损害健康的

整个A的意思是： 因为电动汽车不燃烧化石燃料，因此它们对环境更清洁，对人们更无害。

B= how the electricity they use is generated.

1) they use 是后置定语，修饰 [ the electricity]

2) generate electricity 发电

3) B= 它们使用的电是如何生产的

这句话有三种逻辑，[因果逻辑][比较逻辑][转折逻辑]，值得好好模仿

整句话的意思是：有一个隐含的假设：因为电动车不燃烧化石燃料，所以他们对环境更清洁，对人们更无害，但是这并没有考虑它们使用的电是如何生产出来的。

托福写作范文：老师针对青少年学生的不同教法

托福独立写作真题：

Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students’ learning?

托福写作模板及参考答案：

Educators and researchers have never stopped the examination of the importance and relevance of collaborative and interactive learning that are encouraged by middle schools. When compared with boring lecturing, I, personally, believe that it is far more beneficial to students when they share their ideas and exchange opinions with each other for the following reasons.

First off, exchanging ideas with fellow classmates help students develop critical thinking, presentation skills and other kinds of soft skillsets. When discussing issues with peers, students tend to take a position on a certain issue. In this learning process, students will collect their thoughts and synthesize the concepts learned in textbook or in the lecture to support his or her points. Also, to respond to others’ comments, students have to reflect on the rationale of their own arguments and come up with persuasive reasoning. It is obvious that such activities helps students to learning more meaningfully and extensively. Furthermore, students unconsciously learn how to express themselves affirmatively and make their points clear in front of a large audience. It takes right amount of eye contacts, body language and facial expression to convey one’s idea in a convincing way and such presentation skills can be valuable asset for one’s future career.

Additionally, actively discussing issues with peers can help students to cope with different opinions. When discussing issues with peers, not only do student contribute to the class, but also they get a chance to be exposed to different ideas and perspectives. This is a very conducive experience since we are not living in a vacuum and learning how to appreciate, value and even embrace opinions that are unfamiliar to us can be very important. Furthermore, such experience can be useful in one’s future career when one also has to confront with different business solutions provided by their coworkers. A recent study conducted by Harvard Business Review shows that the one who experienced group discussions and exchanging of views in school demonstrates a higher potential to resolve possible conflicts with future coworkers and enjoys far more promising future.

In conclusion, discussion and idea exchanges should be encouraged since such activities can help students to develop critical thinking, presentation skills and other kinds of soft skillsets, also they will get students prepared on how deal with different opinions now and in future career.

托福写作范文：拥有多项技能的人更成功

托福独立写作题目：

People who develop different skills are more successful than people who develop one skill only.

托福写作模板及参考答案：

When it comes to the qualities of successful people, people varying in education background and experience tend to give distinctive answers. Some would argue that those who are successful should be versatile and excel in lots of skills like communication skills, leadership skills and even organizational skills while others believe that one who is exceptional in one area is more likely to be successful. I personally believe that a versatile person with various skill sets can be more successful.

Admittedly, as the saying goes Jack of all trades and master of none and there are rare cases where some people who are expert in only one field stand out. However, it is more common for versatile people with multiple skills to be successful because of the following reasons.

First off, people who are talented and versatile are more competitive and competent in their career, and they enjoy a better change to be promoted in a professional setting. Actually, a lot of positions require a combination of skill sets, such as paying attention to details, knowledge in a specific field and communication skills, etc. Indeed, more skills will give someone more chance to get promoted. For instance, if a computer programmer just knows how to write program and focuses only on the technical side of the job, chances are that he would never get promoted. On the other hand, if not only does the computer programmer have programming skills but also he is a genius people-wise, he might get a better shot to be promoted as a manager in charge of a team of computer programmers. Thus, he can enjoy more opportunities in his career.

Additionally, it is much easier for a versatile person with various skill sets to build rapport with people and make friends. It is self-evident that people with all kinds of skills will be very attractive and charismatic. A person who not only has professional knowledge in one specific field but also has people skills and leadership skills will be very popular and standing out among his or her peers. For instance, my friend Alex, a bright young professional working in the financial industrial. He was awarded the most valuable banker in his company because of his professionalism and dedication to serving the customers and clients. Not only is he successful in his professional life, but also he is an amateur violinist. Actually, he plays for a city choir to represent the community and go against other cities' choir. Such skills can be very useful when building up connections with people and thus he can expand his social network easily. Furthermore, he can use these skills to entertain his clients and customers on certain occasions and have their trust on him.

In conclusion, a versatile person with various skill sets can be more competitive and outstrip others in the workplace, eventually they enjoy better chance to be promoted. Another advantage of having multiples skills is that it can be much easier and readily for them to network and expand their social connections.